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PostSubject: Revisiting   Revisiting Icon_minitimeSun Aug 12, 2012 11:19 pm

There comes a point in time where it's easy to reflect,
fire up that motivation, stir up that intellect.
Call on your common sense and take a look at your mind,
are you making actions as a victim of time?

Are you constantly reacting, with no premonition,
no thoughts, no plans, it's a shitty position.
Scrounging for food cause this devilish plant
Has turned ever one of these coulds into can't.

So I get riled up and mentally wile out,
the tiny voice inside my head
begins to scream yell and shout.
Screaming for help,
relief and release.

Screaming for a bit of innocence, for peace.

Maybe another hit could ease the thoughts for a minute
but the emotions dwell dormant, soon to revisit.
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PostSubject: Re: Revisiting   Revisiting Icon_minitimeMon Aug 13, 2012 1:14 am

Thats really tight, i like the rhyme scheme.

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