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PostSubject: The Mystery part 2   The Mystery part 2 Icon_minitimeWed Mar 04, 2009 1:27 pm

This is part 2 of the mystery im not sure how many there will be but there will be more i assure you so come back and check em out

The Mystery (p-2)
Well done I can see I’ve watched from afar,
I'm impressed that you’ve made it this far,
Did you piece it together, or shots in the dark?
Dead you leave something, at least your mark?

You must you, see other will follow,
Leave them something or else they’ll be hollow,
Fuck them you say, but why I must ask?
Let them find themselves in this unholy task,

I see that the journey has probed so deep,
I see this lesson is something you’ll keep,
I see that you there is effort that cannot be beat,
I see there is something, perhaps your next feat?

But I see that you now have reached such a fork,
But choose your ambition, and unscrew the cork,
See where it takes, maybe come back,
Maybe you’ll see, that you aren’t even on track,

Perhaps you’ll find that this isn’t so hard,
Or perhaps you’ll find you’re trapped and barred,
And maybe you’ll see only a barrier remains.
Maybe it’s something that stuck in your brain?

But can you jump, face the great feat?
Do you think you can handle all of the heat?
Well done I notice, but where do you sit?
I see something else something more that you’ve hit?

Did you find it inside, the riddle and the clue?
Ill tell you again the answer is you,
But the answer is given and now it seems?
The question is floating but where does it gleam?

To find this question, look deeper within,
To find what your looking enter the pin,
Its something so simple and something you’ll find,
It’s something that burned and stuck in your mind?

But if it’s something so simple than why are you trapped?
You see that you’re guided, it’s already been mapped
Does that mean its something you’ve done?
Does that mean nothing, but maybe someone?
One more I propose, something to seek,
Something of mystery something so bleak,
But depressing euphoria will cloud up your dream,
These emotions are more than they ever did seem,

Something lead on by, something inside,
Something was there but it only did hide,
Has it arrived and showed its true face?
I see, than maybe you must hurry the pace.
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Your poem is amazing!
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thanks bctf; appreciate the support

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